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02 January 2008 @ 04:58 pm
 
so this is a new poem I wrote. hope you like. tell me what you think, if you want to.

Love is in the air
Touching all but me
Everyone but me

Sitting here
I watch life pass me by
Golden years spent alone

Naive in the ways of love
Not knowing why
It touches all but me

Hope is losing its promise
It's glimmer going out
Golden years spent alone

Passing slowly
The days go by
Everyone finds their special someone

Love is in the air
Touching all but me
All but me
 
 
 
Jill: Cute Buttonunowncafe on August 4th, 2008 05:41 pm (UTC)
Awwww that's a very cute poem. I don't really know how to critique something, but i doubt anything was wrong with it.

Haha it sounds like my life, except it only happened once and ya nkow we don't want to return to that.